debian/control sisu description, minor refinement

* (Closes: #767776)

1 files changed, 12 insertions, 11 deletions

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index d424f95b..ee82149f 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -22,21 +22,22 @@ Description: documents - structuring, publishing in multiple formats and search
  structuring, publishing and search framework for document collections.
  .
  With minimal preparation of a plain-text (UTF-8) file, using sisu markup
- syntax in your text editor of choice, SiSU can generate various document
+ syntax in a text editor of your choice, SiSU can generate various document
  formats (most of which share a common object numbering system for locating
  content), including plain text, HTML, XHTML, XML, EPUB, OpenDocument text
  (ODF:ODT), LaTeX, PDF files, and populate an SQL database with objects
  (roughly paragraph-sized chunks) so searches may be performed and matches
  returned with that degree of granularity. Think being able to finely match
- text in documents across different output formats and across languages if you
- have translations of the same document, using common object numbers.
- Additionally for search, your criteria is met by these documents at these
- locations within each document (equally relevant across different output
- formats and languages). To be clear (if obvious) page numbers provide none of
- this functionality. Object numbering is particularly suitable for "published"
- works (finalized texts as opposed to works that are frequently changed or
- updated) for which it provides a fixed means of reference of content. Document
- outputs also share semantic meta-data provided.
+ text in documents, using object numbers, across different output formats and
+ across languages if you have translations of the same document. Search results
+ can be an index of documents and object numbers within them, your criteria is
+ met by these documents at these locations within each document (equally
+ relevant across different output formats and languages). To be clear (if
+ obvious) page numbers provide none of this functionality. Object numbering is
+ particularly suitable for "published" works (finalized texts as opposed to
+ works that are frequently changed or updated) for which it provides a fixed
+ means of reference of content. Document outputs can also share provided
+ semantic meta-data.
  .
  SiSU also provides concordance files, document content certificates and
  manifests of generated output. SiSU provides the means to make book indexes
@@ -50,7 +51,7 @@ Description: documents - structuring, publishing in multiple formats and search
  The package sisu-complete installs the whole of SiSU.
  .
  Additional document markup samples are provided in the package
- sisu-markup-samples which is found in the non-free archive the licenses for
+ sisu-markup-samples which is found in the non-free archive. The licenses for
  the substantive content of the marked up documents provided is that provided
  by the author or original publisher.
  .